My focus and question for this Discourse Analysis essay is: How does A go from being a victim to a confident and more outgoing person? What factors influenced A's change and made her able to move from being a victim who was vulnerable, had no control, and almost abused to a rebel who was powerful, capable of inflicting damage, and going outside the rules?
I think that I did well when it came to pointing out evidence for my focus! EVIDENCE was easy to find for my focus but then I had to actually state how I think that the subject turned from a victim to a rebel which was hard!! I hope that I did well. I think that I did a pretty good job with the paper, but I am not sure if it is exactly what Professor Chandler wanted. If it is, I know that I got down exactly what I need to do to write an DA paper. It seems easy to do DA, but to write a paper on it is a totally different story. If I did, I feel that this was a great accomplishment within this class. I think I did everything that I was supposed to do, so I really do not have anything to say about what I should have worked on. Maybe after I receive feedback, I will be able to answer that!
FEEDBACK?
I would like Professor Chandler and my readers to let me know how my organization was and if I elaborated enough on each point. ALSO, if I did what I was supposed to do. Like I said before, I do not know if I did exactly what Professor Chandler wanted. I would like to know if I stayed on topic and if I
· discuss your characterizations in a way that connects them to larger discourses
· explains those connections in terms of a larger argument or theory supported by your data
This is what Prof. wanted..and I THINK I accomplished that. WE SHALL FIND OUT SOON :)
Also, if I did as well as I THINK I did, I will definitely do my final paper on DA..I know that makes Prof. Chandler happy because of the difficulty in DA. But, she successfully explained and taught ME DA.. I just hope my DA paper shows that...
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