Monday, November 7, 2011

PLAN FOR REVISION FOR DA PAPER

I feel that I did better than expected.  I might consider doing DA for my final paper.  For my revision I will do the following:

  • FORM A BETTER OPENING PARAGRAPH
  • FORM A BETTER CONCLUSION
  • ADD MUCH MORE EVIDENCE
  • USE WORDS THAT RESEARCHERS USE SUCH AS 'A REPRESENTS'
  • REORGANIZE MY PAPER SO THAT IT IS EASIER TO UNDERSTAND..INSTEAD OF  WRITING MY IDEAS/EVIDENCE POINT BY POINT, I WILL MAKE A PARAGRAPH FOR VICTIM EVIDENCE, THEN A PARAGRAPH FOR REBEL EVIDENCE, THEN I WILL FORM A PARAGRAPH THAT COMPARES VICTIM AND REBEL AND THEN ROVES MY POINT TO MY FOCUS
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