- FORM A BETTER OPENING PARAGRAPH
- FORM A BETTER CONCLUSION
- ADD MUCH MORE EVIDENCE
- USE WORDS THAT RESEARCHERS USE SUCH AS 'A REPRESENTS'
- REORGANIZE MY PAPER SO THAT IT IS EASIER TO UNDERSTAND..INSTEAD OF WRITING MY IDEAS/EVIDENCE POINT BY POINT, I WILL MAKE A PARAGRAPH FOR VICTIM EVIDENCE, THEN A PARAGRAPH FOR REBEL EVIDENCE, THEN I WILL FORM A PARAGRAPH THAT COMPARES VICTIM AND REBEL AND THEN ROVES MY POINT TO MY FOCUS
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